The essay is about a journey of me along with my family. We set out on a road trip heading towards Bombay . My board exams had just gotten over and taking a trip as a stress buster . It talks about how I was longing to step out in the rain and feel the lovely drops of water hitting my face. How fresh it made me feel. It talks about the few special moments spent together with your family which will be cherished forever . This is one memory that will be in my mind forever . It is set in Rajasthan as we were passing through it during our journey to Bombay. What a lovely time we had!
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Overall, I got the feeling that the story was unfinished and just for the sake of being able to send something. I would definitely not suggest this for others to buy. The presentation, itself, was not to my satisfaction. It was not justified and was completely done in haste. In the first paragraph, there was no indention and on the others, there were.Princess R.
I've got to agree with Eleanor. This essay is lacking both in content and organization.