The essay is about admission essay on computer science.It has pointed out how people have changed through refreshing their knowledge through computer.
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This essay is vaguely written.The introduction ought to be more arresting.The student must always remember that he has to keep the reader's interest alive while going through his paper and not make sweeping generalisations.He ought to convince the admission panel that he is the right candidate .Princess R.
I do agree with kala. It is vaguely written although the writer actually did his best in coming up with this admission essay.